YesterdayTodayForever

Everyone please check out my new story. I know I've only posted a bit but I just need some feedback as to what I should add, remove and things like that. That'll be greatly appreciated! Thank you all by the way. 

I'm sorry I haven't been on for such a long time. Thank you to everyone who followed me! I'll try to read more of ur stories and help with anything I can :) thanx again!!