FortunetheThird

"Help! Help me!" I felt someone was shouting but I couldn't focus. Everything was out of focus and blurry. I couldn't feel, I couldn't see, I couldn't taste, all I knew is I had to survive.
          	
          	Dirt tentacles burrowed out of the ground, lava dripped from a unknown source and shrapnel rained from the sky. I ran and ran until I was as far from the city as possible, then I collapsed.
          	
          	
          	Hello! This is my first announcement and story. What do you think? Is it good? I had a dream and it was a good story so I'm writing about it. If I do go through with it, I'll try to update twice a week, but no promises because school is starting soon. 
          	-Fortune

FortunetheThird

Also, what should I name the story? I'm absolutely terrible with names.
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FortunetheThird

"Help! Help me!" I felt someone was shouting but I couldn't focus. Everything was out of focus and blurry. I couldn't feel, I couldn't see, I couldn't taste, all I knew is I had to survive.
          
          Dirt tentacles burrowed out of the ground, lava dripped from a unknown source and shrapnel rained from the sky. I ran and ran until I was as far from the city as possible, then I collapsed.
          
          
          Hello! This is my first announcement and story. What do you think? Is it good? I had a dream and it was a good story so I'm writing about it. If I do go through with it, I'll try to update twice a week, but no promises because school is starting soon. 
          -Fortune

FortunetheThird

Also, what should I name the story? I'm absolutely terrible with names.
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