ForzenFrostz

What do you think about this? After Issei beats the strongest enemy yet and goes back in time to re-live his life but instead he got Albion? (female of course)

MatthiasWrites

If I gotta tell you, some of these stories are kind of bad with their grammar, the betrayal doesn't have a solid reason, there's just too many capital letters that you're wasting for emphasis. It's merely a self-fulfillment betrayal fantasy.

ForzenFrostz

@MatthiasWrites I agree with what you said, the grammar is suckass that I had to use Grammarly with some parts, and the betrayal reason is not that great as well, I just use that as an excuse because I got no other idea for the beginning of the betrayal story
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Myinttmyatthu1244

Hello

Myinttmyatthu1244

Ah it's nothing.Just saying Hello
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ForzenFrostz

I have confession to tell y'all, the reason I didn't continue Fantasy Adventure - Hero of Supernatural, yet it's because I am currently making another 4 story right now
          
          1. Return of the Strongest White Dragon
          
          2. Crimson Scørching ƁŁØØĐ Dragon Emperor
          
          3. CounteЯ:Side of DxD; War of Humanity
          
          4. The Last World of Us: No More Peach