Fou-Roux

Hey guys, I’ll be writing a few more chapters for my Meripunzel fic but it will be a few days. I just got two teeth extracted and I’ve gotta focus on that for now :)

Fou-Roux

I'm sorry but what is up with the shitty writing on some of these stories? And I mean I and my stories aren't perfect but at least I paid attention in literature class. Like the lack of structure in sentences and the complete inaccuracies. "and then like ___ kissed ____ and she was like omg fangirl squeal!" That is not how you write a story. Its so informal it sounds like I'm over hearing someone talk about some gossip to their friends.