FoulEncoder471

[Part 1] Okay, so it turns out that Delta From The Eminence in Shadow turned out to be FAR stronger and skilled than I first thought. After doing more study in the LN's, and seeing a bit of the Seven Shadow Chronicles (which are the only parts of the MoG Games that are canon), it would appear that she's pretty much a walking titan.
          	
          	First of all, during the early days of SG (recently before the Templars/Priestess Victoria Arc), Shadow instructed Delta on a technique which allowed her to maximize her magical power, and she somehow managed to effortlessly imitate it... which even Beta had trouble doing.
          	
          	More so, it turns out that according to Shadow and Lambda, Delta is the single most talented, skilled, and fastest of the 7 Shadows ("Skilled" I find contradictory due to her intelligence. By the time of Volume 5 Zeta is the fastest as Shadow said she had gotten stronger than before and Zeta managed to blitz and outrun her) 
          	
          	Not only that, it is also stated by Alpha herself that Delta (still around 10 btw) had surpassed her power the rest of the Seven Shadows in terms of power by far... in turn meaning that she would be superior to an Overdrive Shadow in terms of power (Shadow would still destroy her in a fight, objectively; no need to explain or even assume) as Alpha before even being cured was said to have more magic power than Shadow himself; this most certainly would have changed by the time of Volume 5 due to Shadow's Mana Conservation ability.
          	
          	NGL, looking back on Delta's fight with Zeta, it was mainly Delta who caused a lot of the damage to the environment, and even managed to level and entire forest within minutes.
          	
          	Furthermore, Shadow posing as "John Smith" stated that he most likely could never defeat her using threads alone, and that her senses and reactions surpassed his considerably. To be clear, characters like Alpha, Shadow, (and arguably Zeta) are still superior, but only due to higher skill and magic control... TEIS really has flipped the switch.

FoulEncoder471

[Part 1] Okay, so it turns out that Delta From The Eminence in Shadow turned out to be FAR stronger and skilled than I first thought. After doing more study in the LN's, and seeing a bit of the Seven Shadow Chronicles (which are the only parts of the MoG Games that are canon), it would appear that she's pretty much a walking titan.
          
          First of all, during the early days of SG (recently before the Templars/Priestess Victoria Arc), Shadow instructed Delta on a technique which allowed her to maximize her magical power, and she somehow managed to effortlessly imitate it... which even Beta had trouble doing.
          
          More so, it turns out that according to Shadow and Lambda, Delta is the single most talented, skilled, and fastest of the 7 Shadows ("Skilled" I find contradictory due to her intelligence. By the time of Volume 5 Zeta is the fastest as Shadow said she had gotten stronger than before and Zeta managed to blitz and outrun her) 
          
          Not only that, it is also stated by Alpha herself that Delta (still around 10 btw) had surpassed her power the rest of the Seven Shadows in terms of power by far... in turn meaning that she would be superior to an Overdrive Shadow in terms of power (Shadow would still destroy her in a fight, objectively; no need to explain or even assume) as Alpha before even being cured was said to have more magic power than Shadow himself; this most certainly would have changed by the time of Volume 5 due to Shadow's Mana Conservation ability.
          
          NGL, looking back on Delta's fight with Zeta, it was mainly Delta who caused a lot of the damage to the environment, and even managed to level and entire forest within minutes.
          
          Furthermore, Shadow posing as "John Smith" stated that he most likely could never defeat her using threads alone, and that her senses and reactions surpassed his considerably. To be clear, characters like Alpha, Shadow, (and arguably Zeta) are still superior, but only due to higher skill and magic control... TEIS really has flipped the switch.

DamienDillon85

Hey I'm noticing that you are posting the same chapters again and again. If you need to take a break then copy every very of them so you can compare them with your latest version and take what you like and add what you think is best to the newest version. Hope this helps.

DamienDillon85

@DamienDillon85 no problem if you do take advice make sure to keep multiple copies of any stories you're working on until you're satisfied with what you got.
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FoulEncoder471

@DamienDillon85 Thanks, but I actually unpublished it by accident this time (I attempted overviewing another fanfic I unpublished that had only one chapter, but I accidentally mis-clicked on the nearest fac I had) I appreciate the tip though.
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Shadowofthyself

Thanks for the votes. You didn't have to.
          Like your Hellaverse story, I can't believe I didn't get to read it sooner. Also you write pretty good; don't ever feel/think your stuff is trash.
          
          Happy New year btw !

Shadowofthyself

@Shadowofthyself Thank you. Despite the simple style, it works.
            Thanks either way for the votes.
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FoulEncoder471

@Shadowofthyself Thank you, the writing was also more a simple style (which I saw that I should put as much effort as I do in my other series), I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I was just returning the favor.
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FoulEncoder471

Explanation for inconsistancy: I thank you all for being patient with me, but as to why I have not been posting so much it is because I am waiting for SilverStorm8's Ninjago Chapter to be finished the the next crossover can be worked on together as a collaboration, which hopefully should start soon.
          
          Of course there is no excuse for the other stories, but I am working on the overall plot and considering making other stories like one on The Eminence in Shadow among other things, thank you all for the support on my stories, even the littlest meant (and still means) the world to me, FoulEncoder out.

Shadowofthyself

@FoulEncoder471 Ohh, that's cool !
            Take your time with everything. No need to rush.
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FoulEncoder471

Notice: I once more apologize for the lack of conistency, I am working on multiple different stories here while also planning new ones; I am not sure the order of what chapters for which story will come next but I am planning on updating "The Fallen One" soon. 
          
          PS: One of the stories I'm planning on releasing is one about The Eminence in Shadow, but I will start that after I finish reading the last few Light Novels.

FoulEncoder471

Notice: Hazbin Hotel: Fallen From Grace is getting a rewrite, though if your a plan don't worry I wont ruin it. I will be adding new elements to the story to add to it's ongoing storyline and hopefully have a unique MC which can be seen as both a self-insert and his own character.
          
          I am also sorry for the lack of many updates on my part as I have been quite busy with other things, I will update some other stories soon.

Shadowofthyself

@FoulEncoder471 That's alright. Do what you think is key and necessary to a good story.
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