Fox Delta

I don't know if it's me or the story, but it's rather, mmm, bland? I know there isn't any real combat but it seems to be lacking in describing the setting and what's going on around them.

this stuff looks really great. I grew up on the movie "Red Dawn!"
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          It is the best place for guys to meet each other and start figuring out how to promote stories like your that appeal more to the male crowd. Hope to see you there.

Thank's a lot for fanning me (:

chairsniffa@gmail.com send away to your hearts content lol glad to be of assistance:)

@foxdeltaproductions  I'd love to. Deal! ;)

@JoannaNestoridi  I would appreciate your help, we still need editors and proof-readers. Right now im working on it myself but when I am done I can send you the story to proof-read, and you tell me what you think or check for mistakes. 

Hello there,
          
          sounds fun and like a great story to me.... so, if you still want help, I'm offering!
          ;)
          
          Good luck, anyway!

Hey guys, I like what you got going. I'd be happy to read it as you go, give you my input.