tulakuno

Hi po! Gusto ko lang magbigay ng maikling rebyu sa gawa nyo (Voices in my head). 
          
          Una: It feels like any other collection of poems, it does not try to be something more, pero I think sometimes it's ok naman, hindi naman natin kailangan palaging i-aim na magbreak ng boundaries. Minsan sapat na na simple, basta genuine. PERO hindi masama na subukan nating mas maging creative sa pagdeliver ng message.
          
          Pangalawa: Technicality. Ang naging problema ko dito ay grammatical errors, mga simple lang naman at madaling baguhin (your, you're and all that), kung nakaligtaan mo lang 'yon mas mabuti sigurong mag reread at revise . Di ko na iisa isahin ang bawat mali, kaya mo na yan. Alam kong di natin kailangan maging perfect sa technicalities, at alam kong mahirap maging perpekto sa aspektong 'yon, pero we can try.
          
          Overall, naenjoy ko naman sya. May isa o dalawang, tumatak sa kin. Gusto ko lang ihabol na nakakatuwa na ang ayos ng format mo sa gawa mo at ang ganda nito tingnan.
          
          Yun lang po muna. Keep writing po!

FrailPrincess

@robertrom2222 ahh salamatt poooo isang malaking tulong po sakin tong mga advice nyo. Thank you din po sa pag appreciate.
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mxtsuro

Hello, Karinna. Sorry kung hindi ako nakikipagusap sa inyo. I know everything will not make sense at all. Like yes, my reasons are just dumb lol. But please remember that it doesn't mean I forgot all of you. I just don't know what to say or to do. I'm coward. This past few months, I stayed in my own fantasy. Forgetting everyone. Even my closest friends, teachers, family and everybody in-between. Di ko nga rin nakuha card ko eh hehehe. Its my fault for being weak. Nadala ako sa takot. Not only in COVID, but also to talk to anyone that has connection in me. Okay lang kung magalit kayo sa akin. But I know to myself na one day babalik din sa dati. I never hate you. Nor everyone else. It's just me. The problem is me. I'm not capable of socializing. I'm not worth it. Sorry talaga. Ingat ka ah. Sana magkita pa tayo in the future.