Haha first off, thanks for following me. And secondly, of course I'll read your story and tell you my thoughts. I wanted to take this chat somewhere else so we don't give her more ratings then she deserves on her story. I do want you to keep in mind though, before I check out your story, that everyone has different tastes in reading material and just because your story may not be for me doesn't mean that someone else won't like it. But I can promise that I will say nothing but the truth about my opinion of your story.