FreakOfNature6

@fabsreeti Aww thank you I kind of gave up on it but I think Ill do a few more chapters and see how goes. 

FreakOfNature6

@mtd1109 Haha all good :) and my story isn't actually about lions - the title refers to bravery in soldiers. I suppose its themes are similar to those of The Hunger Games and Divergent but is still an original story. Being a lover of horror movies I have made it a little gruesome and there is some coarse language so say if you think anything needs to have a little less intensity. Once again, thank you this is a very generous offer XD

mtd1109

Haha first off, thanks for following me. And secondly, of course I'll read your story and tell you my thoughts. I wanted to take this chat somewhere else so we don't give her more ratings then she deserves on her story. I do want you to keep in mind though, before I check out your story, that everyone has different tastes in reading material and just because your story may not be for me doesn't mean that someone else won't like it. But I can promise that I will say nothing but the truth about my opinion of your story.