Frenchtoastisawesome

Guys please comment and criticize my story I need it.

Frenchtoastisawesome

Please read my historical fiction story! Feel free to vote and comment!

Frenchtoastisawesome

@ urmom777776555  Thank you!!! Are you enjoying the story so far?
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vampvussy

HELLO FELLOW CHOIR KID 

Frenchtoastisawesome

@ vampvussy  are you a choir kid too?
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Pure_Vanilla

Hah a choir kid
                            - me (also a choir kid)

Frenchtoastisawesome

@Pure_Vanilla FINALLY ANOTHER ONE OF US
            
            (btw do you do theatre?)
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Frenchtoastisawesome

Who are thèse random ass people following me

TheObsessiveMess

@Frenchtoastisawesome ah well don’t follow them and more won’t come
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Frenchtoastisawesome

@ TheObsessiveMess  eh I'm not brothers by them i was just confused 
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