Azreil

KAY SO HERE'S THE DEAL WITH "Paradise"
          
          I'm not taking down.
          I will continue. I know I promised to soon, but honestly, lifes been getting in the way, and now I have TIME, and I don't have the MUSE. there is also a lot of editing I'd like to do over the chapters I have up so far, even possible plot changes. So I must dreadfully say,it's on hold.
          
          BUT, I will still be alive and posting. I've got a new something up my sleeve to keep you guys entertained (and make my muse happy) while I'm editing "Paradise" I don't want to give away too much, but it's a story that came to me, and it's very personal to me because of the theme and the common identity me and the main character will share. Think Rroma.
          
          Thank you for the patience deary's, love ya! <3
          
          p.s. DON'T READ THIS AND THING ON HOLD MEANS DEAD IT MEANS I'M EDITING CURRENTLY SO HOLD YOUR HORSES.
          
          P.p.s. Hearts to make up for that scary caps <33333333333

Alright so I know it's been a while since I have updated "Paradise" and I'm truly sorry for that. It will be done, hopefully soon. I am shooting for having it published by either the 19th or 20th. 
          
          And one other thing, I am considering writing a more formal short story, I don't want to give away too much, but something with a theme and deep metaphor. A lot like how "Paradise" has except no more than 20 pages and with more formal language used. I tend to give into popular demand and write casually as I've done with "Paradise" though I typically read formally written books and enjoy to write with that type of sophistication as well. Let me know your thoughts?
          
          Much love ❤️

Hi! I'll check out your story now. Hope you could critique my story too. Thanks! :)
          
          Falling in Love at a Coffee Shop
          http://www.wattpad.com/52185950-falling-in-love-at-a-coffee-shop

@HardeeBurger It's truly wonderful to meet others that are on fire for the lord, message me anytime you'd like~.

Wow, that's pretty good! :D Yeah, it's one of my favorites as well, very inspirational and motivating.

I love ur profile picture! :D

Okay, I owe quite a few people critiques, I'm going to tag you guys. I'm sick, sadly, but I will get to it. It'll just be a little delayed. I'll try to get to most of you today, but I request patience. I'm doing my best to get everyone I owe tagged. I will certainly get you each of your stories when my health permits. I'll do as many as I can today. @AlyssaVienesseTan @-1812- @ali_ajami12 @linsy13 @kyrazimmermann @viviloana

can you critic my book please

This is the account we'll be posting The o2l story on

Change of plan with the story i have made a shared account with a friend who is helping me with the story so we will be posting the story I DM you saying it was @Ashleigh_Cait but its actually @Cait_Ashleigh we followed you, sorry if this confuses you