Hello Freya!
I read your story called The one who got away and I must say that I am enjoying it so far. It is really engaging and the concept is interesting, but if you don't mind I will also add a little criticism for that one. Please, don't take it as a criticism, but only as a small idea for improvement ;)
•I noticed that there is a lot of minor mistakes in your text. It isn't anything big, but it can become quite uncomfortable if you see a name with small capital. I think it would be better to double check it
•I think you could edit your profile photo a little. While it looks cute, I think that most of the readers prefer more serious pictures like nature, animals or movie characters
•Maybe it would be good to edit the info about your book and make to make it more catchy and attractive for your readers.
Okay, I am so sorry for writing such a things and hope I didn't spoil your mood. Having brutally honest personality is a curse.
You don't have to do anything I mentioned before - it's your book so you can do anything you want. Plus I don't even have the courage to publish my own book. (You are so brave btw). But I hope you will continue writing and improving yourself. You have already started well, so keep up your good job, please!
Have a nice and cozy winter days❄️☕,
Ronja ♥️
