bhawyabansal

Well hi there I have seen your work and i am really in love with your story its very interesting 
          The development of characters is amazing you are doing a really good job keep going BTW if you have some time please read" a broken heart " its a collection of poems which shows the suffering, pain and agony of a broken soul. 
          I am looking for people who could give me there honest feedback, . I hope that you would like it

bhawyabansal

@Friday13th2010  yes please and please give me your honest feedback so I could work on my mistakes
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Friday13th2010

@bhawyabansal 
            
            I would be happy to have a look at the collection of poems and I'm glad you like my story.
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