I'm reformatting BTS World [Installing].
While the stats say people have been reading it I haven't gotten any feedback/kudos. So it makes me think that the story isn't working so far for folks. Or maybe I'm projecting my own uncertainty. The premise is hard for me to write because time travel, inherantly, contrived. I've taken some time to outline the story to see if that helps. Afterall I'm writing fanfic in part to practice writing so when there's a problem, like the edit.
Buuuuutttt, I have other stories to update so it might be a while till I holistically update the existing chapters.