Zensikyuno
Yo!! Wassup Froggi, its Eli here (you were in my conversations, I'm sure you remember me! ^_^)
I just wanna say, your book is great! Some tips though, maybe when making some spaces for some shock, don't make it too long! ^_^ like the " " or the "." leaving as spaces for surprises!
It's nice though, I'll be waiting for the longer version! >_<
