HeroDeep

Just a feedback improve a little on spacing between your chapters paragraph and dialogues to make it easy to understand 

FromFamousFive

@HeroDeep yes actually previously I used to type on phone and post from pc during copy pasting formatting was lost 
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Ritz_0_77

Hi, when will you update Ira

FromFamousFive

@Ritz_0_77 hi i rewrote Ira hope you will like newer version
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FromFamousFive

@Ritz_0_77 and if you can please comment on book
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