stampy11
You guys are good but there isn't any romance which is a key part of any action story . When there is love in your story you have people not only rooting for good guys and bad guys but you also have them rooting for the guy/girl to get with that person and make there life complete. If you ever need help I would gladly comply all I ask is for partial credit. ( also I draw to so I whouldnt mind sending you some )
Frostclan
I know what no. I just wrote u a long "love story" on legend of Frostclan. I swear to god, if I don't see a comment on that thing, I will kill you next Monday. En-freaking-joy
Frostclan
Oh nvm I didn't realize that Bella had made a new story for you. Sorry. I won't write anything.
Frostclan
OH YOU WANT ROMANCE?! ILL GIVE U SOME FREAKIN ROMANCE. CHECK LEGEND OF FROSTCLAN LATER. ILL POST SOMETHING JUST FOR UUUUUU -Rosepaw