underthestars232

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327826633?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=under_the_stars232&wp_originator=NIlGA9aTFhHESJ6OnskzIJBlKGczabbZ4kaORp71rqYZ%2FMSlgy51xSqjbG1xyGeroeMyhp7fU3Ef%2BIp6JaI1z4F051OAwsc6f64%2F5EGv7S404aUGNltvS6%2FI%2FFxD7K6H

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WhiskeySeattle

Just wanted to stop by and say THANK YOUUUUUUUU for all of your brilliant comments on my story!!!! You absolutely made my month ❤️ Wishing you happiness and health and fabulous reading my friend! You are the BEST!! 

Fuckette

Aww! You’re so stinking sweet! Thank you for writing an incredible book worthy of spamming.  
            
            I hope you’ll continue to write because you have so much talent. Wishing you nothing but the best in your future 
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medhasharma2003

"Never regret something that made you smile."     ~~Mark Twain
          
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