FunkaiTing

Yoo'
          Take a look at my story 'Raquel's Story'
          I'm open to criticism, so tell me what you think.
          
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          Safee :')

Hi, how’s it going?  
          I uploaded Chapters 4 and 5 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/500304-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right  
          http://www.wattpad.com/500318-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right
          

Hi can you come read my story, A Perfect Race or Apart of His World for me? I'll return the favor,thanks :)

About 2 mayke ah storii :D