FuzzyFox17

I have decided to enter another writing contest. Yes, yes I know, before you start yapping at me, I know I should have continued my other stories first. But before you say anything, read this short story and tell me what you think! https://www.wattpad.com/story/135761916

FuzzyFox17

I have decided to enter another writing contest. Yes, yes I know, before you start yapping at me, I know I should have continued my other stories first. But before you say anything, read this short story and tell me what you think! https://www.wattpad.com/story/135761916

philosophersandfools

Hey! Made my morning to wake up and see you had followed and voted on Addict  So- thanks! (At least, it's morning here in the US- not sure about in Germany). Happy New Year! 

philosophersandfools

@KaylinFink yep I'm doing the Serial Mystery challenge! Yeah I find it a challenge to discover new stories too... wish there was a way to filter search results based on date posted, view count, etc.
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philosophersandfools

@KaylinFink yep I'm doing the Serial Mystery challenge! Yeah I find it a challenge to discover new stories too... wish there was a way to filter search results based on date posted, view count, etc.
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philosophersandfools

@KaylinFink yep I'm doing the Serial Mystery challenge! Yeah I find it a challenge to discover new stories too... wish there was a way to filter search results based on date posted, view count, etc.
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FuzzyFox17

@izzy_charlie17 You're welcome. Your story is very realistic and your writing style fluent. One of the best stories I've read in this contest.
          Although you might want to change "Death was demanding to take on of us" to "one of us" if that is you meant. :-)