Can I just say that I am ashamed of some of the comments I have seen on others work. This is ridiculous. If you don't know how to critique someones work properly then log off. This is not gaiaonline of youtube. We make art on here and if you are just being rude and inconsiderate or a troll then please find something better to do with your life. Believe it or not, writing is hard. You try sitting in front of a computer screen for hours on end typing words, developing characters, settings, and a story line. Go ahead I dare you, see how many reads and helpful comments you receive. There is a major difference between critiquing someones work and being an jacka**. (Mind my choice of diction)