Hi, this is Ghost
Before anything, yes, I have been slow on posting, like, REALLY slow, I have reasons which I will keep to myself, which make you being upset (if you are about not having updates) are more justified, and those slow updates, which I can say with certainty, will become the normal routine, so, this is an apology if you may have liked my storied and wanted more.
Now to my main point in this post, I made this account (my first and main) in March 2020, I wrote my first chapter March 2021, now we are in June 2024, why am I mentioning this? Because before anything, I have a big gratefulness and thanks to those who pointed my mistakes and told me ways better for writing stories, I am thankful for everything since only because of them my English speaking, understanding, writing, and everything become better, so, thank you again.
Meanwhile, I was thinking of changing my writing style, I write in this style that is:
Things that happens and everything that occurs.
Person: talking
Person: *doing something while talking*
This style I use for 2 reason 1) more time sufficient 2) easier for readers.
What I am trying to change is throwing away the talking that has it's own different lines and mixing it with the lines of what is happening so everyone can have a better idea what they do while talking with out using (*) it all depend on you, if you want, I can turn it that way, if not, I will not change it.
Sorry for the long post, I know some of you may even skip some of the writing, anyway, thank you for reading it, and hope for your happiness, wherever you are, whenever you are, whoever you are, I wish you the best.