GKSMac123

Man how can i balance Shadow in the story while providing a well established and well written antagonists.
          	
          	Problems with overpowered MCs, too difficult to write that wont seems stupid raagh  

Jakubkg

@GKSMac123 well ye , imprisoning cid in a sanctuary that would make illusions of his dream as eminence in shadow and let his delusions be closer to reality , i dont think he would want to get out od the imprissonment , something simillar to how starro was giving Batman halucinations of a vishion where his parents live in justice league ultimate
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GKSMac123

@Jakubkg  woahhh thank you for your wonderful suggestion and you'll see soon enough!
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Jakubkg

@GKSMac123 dunno if you're trying to find a way to make shadow lose outsmart him outplay him something simillar to jjk S2 where gojo was sealed maybe they didnt overpower him ,outsmarth him... Not really sure they shocked him and that was enaugh to do something and in this story seeing as powerfull shadow is even when he would be somehow beaten he would more likely come back , sanctuary that sealed a part of diabłów wasn't capavle of holding him and IT had imprisoned Aurora so... Yeah dunno how will you do this the series is about sealling shadow the only way i can see someone sealling him and not him breaking out of the sanctuary is maybe using simillar mechanic to sanctuarys defences and making false memories making him stay maybe out of lack of knowelage of what is really happening or make IT a interresting experienced for him do even of he won't realise IT he will succumb to false reality of the sanctuary that will maybe mąkę his eminence in shadow dreams come true and bring his desires to (false) reality so he would by want to leave but do whatever you want this is just a suggestion you van use IT if you want
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Jakubkg

Alr bro how long will it take (don't rush just give a prediction)

Jakubkg

Dang alr alr i understand , wish you luck
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GKSMac123

@Jakubkg  College life is crazy and i cant find the time to write though i still write but only little by little
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GKSMac123

Man how can i balance Shadow in the story while providing a well established and well written antagonists.
          
          Problems with overpowered MCs, too difficult to write that wont seems stupid raagh  

Jakubkg

@GKSMac123 well ye , imprisoning cid in a sanctuary that would make illusions of his dream as eminence in shadow and let his delusions be closer to reality , i dont think he would want to get out od the imprissonment , something simillar to how starro was giving Batman halucinations of a vishion where his parents live in justice league ultimate
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GKSMac123

@Jakubkg  woahhh thank you for your wonderful suggestion and you'll see soon enough!
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Jakubkg

@GKSMac123 dunno if you're trying to find a way to make shadow lose outsmart him outplay him something simillar to jjk S2 where gojo was sealed maybe they didnt overpower him ,outsmarth him... Not really sure they shocked him and that was enaugh to do something and in this story seeing as powerfull shadow is even when he would be somehow beaten he would more likely come back , sanctuary that sealed a part of diabłów wasn't capavle of holding him and IT had imprisoned Aurora so... Yeah dunno how will you do this the series is about sealling shadow the only way i can see someone sealling him and not him breaking out of the sanctuary is maybe using simillar mechanic to sanctuarys defences and making false memories making him stay maybe out of lack of knowelage of what is really happening or make IT a interresting experienced for him do even of he won't realise IT he will succumb to false reality of the sanctuary that will maybe mąkę his eminence in shadow dreams come true and bring his desires to (false) reality so he would by want to leave but do whatever you want this is just a suggestion you van use IT if you want
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GKSMac123

Uhhh alright almost 8 months gone, Im so bad and i literally forgot that i have a wattpad story that im working on 
          
          Sorry everyone for the inconsistency of my motivation
          
          (Literally 8 months gone, Time really just flew by) 

GKSMac123

@Jakubkg yeah, im working on it dw (actually for real) 
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Jakubkg

@GKSMac123 
            Worry not, i'm patient take as much as you need
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KyleOS6

Hey im gonna ask about what happened?
          Not that im rushing you or anything just trying to know what happened to you

GKSMac123

It starts with January 31 till Feb 14 (3 weeks and every friday)
            
            I had to study hard cuz of the exams i failed in my midterms
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GKSMac123

Can i really do 10k words? 
          Im running out of ideas for this fight scenes

KyleOS6

@GKSMac123 Having trouble and having a mental block? thats rough
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GKSMac123

@GodzillaFK Okay, thank you ❤️
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Luci_fer_Pride

@GKSMac123 post whenever you feel like you can.
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GKSMac123

this message may be offensive
Oh my god, Midterms is finally done...Ugh im gonna fucking pass out to stress... 
          
          Sadly, I have failed 3 out of 8 midterm exams even though i tried my best to study those... 
          
          Im sure that the next chapter will be released this week since i already started writing today (4pm) 
          
          As always ill try my best and Thank you!

Sosome45

@GKSMac123 
            Congrats on having midterms completed. And sorry for those 3 exams. Hopefully it's ok.
            Take rest. As that is needed buddy.
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GKSMac123

One more week! 

minhuy3107

By the way, I have another exam in 2 weeks.
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minhuy3107

You can do it!!! Wish you all the best!!!
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Sosome45

@GKSMac123 
            Good luck buddy
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GKSMac123

Bad news everyone...
          
          My Midterms exams in college is getting near (2 weeks from now on)
           so i have to focuses back all my time to reviewing the materials
          
          I might not be able to update my fanfic anytime soon
          
          Sorry for the inconvinience everyone.

GKSMac123

@Sosome45 @minhuy3107 Goodluck on yall exams too!
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minhuy3107

I also have an exam 2 weeks from now too. Well I guess we should tried our best to pass these exam. Good luck!
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Sosome45

@GKSMac123 
            Oh same buddy. I have my exams from tomorrow. (2nd mid term) Then my finals from November end of december starting.
            Good luck for ur exams. Hope we do well on them
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Sosome45

Btw, will you give eta more depth in your fic? Because you were giving some eta characterisation in previous chs

Sosome45

Epsilon is a very caring girl. After alpha, she is the most caring one among the shades. She was the one who took care for eta in their childhood. She is very caring but has the right amount of strictness. Her subordinates and lambda confirms this as well.
            Sadly, anime put way more emphasis on her boobs joke. That's why, many people only sees herself as a comedy relief character. When in reality she is a very good girl. I know she has rivalry with beta because of her pride. But that isn't the only thing she have.
            
            Tho I get it, as anime and manga likes to put more emphasis on gags of characters. 
            
            No problem, I like long messages as well. When talking about teis. As for eta, yeah writing her could be difficult, as we don't know much of her
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GKSMac123

@Sosome45 Tbh, i really plan to write each seven shades character arc in the future.
            
             but im struggling with Epsilon and Eta the most. Im still struggling writing Eta because im trying to find a way to write her with more depth without ruining her canon personality and traits. 
            
            But worry not, i have already looked for way to write her up without ruining her character.
            
            And as for Episilon... Well sorry for Epsilon fans out there but i just find her character boring and unappealing.. She is prideful, Good at controlling magic but what comes after that? As far as i can remembered she was used to be a 'comedy relief character' because of her secret.
            
            Thats all and sorry for yapping so much.
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GKSMac123

Sneak peek for the next chapter.
          
          
          "Sealing Day: Fall of Shadow."
          
          
          
          Yeah let that sink in. ;>

Sosome45

@GKSMac123 shadow will cosplay gojo, I see. Ofcourse he won't be defeated. But sealed in a way. Can't wait for that. And see how sg will react.
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KyleOS6

@GKSMac123 Huh?? Ummm Is Shadow gonna lose? Thats quite rare to see.
            
            I rarely see people write Shadow to lose, I cant wait to see how this play out.
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