@GLWard5
My first published novel, available on Amazon at http://smarturl.it/pntt . This is an attempt to address some feedback I received from that. The changes are minor. It's the sotry of a shipwreck on an alternative Earth where humans never evolved. https://www.wattpad.com/story/96042094
Thank you for adding EMPTY CITY to your reading list! I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
@GLWard5 I'm more focused on plot and character development, though comments on style and pacing would be appreciated as well :) So basically anything that strikes you. What about you?
@LydiaPflieger As I read your story, what kind of comments are you seeking? Style? Content? Character-development? Plot-development? Pacing? What are your greatest concerns?
