@GMSilver
There was a delay in getting part two of Chapter Ten out but here it is, in all its glory! Together with the new cover art, I'm very fond of it all. Let me know what you think, everyone! :) Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/885922307-the-starfallers-saga-volume-one-the-ripple
New cover art for The Ripple Prophecy! Second part of chapter ten will be posted this Friday, so look out for it. Link to the story: https://www.wattpad.com/885922307-the-starfallers-saga-volume-one-the-ripple
Chapter ten is a bit long, so I've split it into two parts. The first part has just been posted, introducing us to a change in narrative style as our MCs begin to tell us how they came to be the people they are today! Click this link to start reading: https://www.wattpad.com/885922307-the-starfallers-saga-volume-one-the-ripple
Reference sheet for The Ripple Prophecy has been updated with color portraits for each of the four main characters, go take a look! https://www.wattpad.com/885922307-the-starfallers-saga-volume-one-the-ripple
Happy Friday everyone, even if it's still Thursday where you guys are (in which case you get it early)! Chapters two and three of The Ripple Prophecy have been reposted with the updates. Enjoy the story here! https://www.wattpad.com/story/220349408-the-starfallers-saga-volume-one-the-ripple
Hey everyone! I've taken a slight break from writing forward on The Ripple Prophecy to reformat Chapter Two and Chapter Three.
I realized thanks to helpful feedback that the pacing needed reworking, and I take all constructive feedback seriously.
This Friday I'll be re-uploading Chapters Two and Three with the updated versions. Thank you everyone for your patience!
@CandidMetier Yeah so the trouble was that chapter two was originally a flashbaack that I didn't handle well in trying to make an active scene initially. So I've added more dialogue and personalization of the main characters. I'm not sure how much extra plot elements I threw in, but hopefully it's easier to follow now. We'll see on Friday!
@GMSilver Thank you for considering that because I was having a little trouble with getting the story plot.
"Chapter Nine: A Place to Begin" has been published for The Ripple Prophecy! Please leave a like if you enjoy. I encourage all kinds of feedback and review.