GORILLAZ_lover101

Whats great about this story is how this has happened to me through real life expiriences <3 https://www.wattpad.com/story/167663337

Caristotle64

Hi Katie! I’m Caleb. I have read the story “Trial of Dawn” and it’s pretty good! I liked how you set up the setting and the plot in the beginning. I don’t know if I CAN give you more advice. All I can say is keep up the good work. 

GORILLAZ_lover101

@Caristotle64 Thank you for reading my   first story!  I really appreciate your comment and vote .  This helped me a lot thank you 
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