KancettoKryze

Hey mate thanks for reading Kancetto Kryze The Mandalorian Jedi and thanks for leaving some comments I really appreciate it. Hope you've been enjoying the story.

KancettoKryze

@GSamus Thanks mate. I do have to admit that there is a lot of battles and you are right there is an imbalance though and it is purely because of the Clone Wars. You know if it's not battles then some mission is taking place that has some kind of effect on the Clone Wars. Though I will say and maybe this is a spoiler I'm working on two chapters right now and they are both long I will admit. Though the reason why some are so long is partially because for my chapters I rather tell the full story for the chapter instead of splitting it into two. Just a personal writing preference of mine where and when I think I can get away with it. Though I have done a three chapter story like for the Second Battle of Excarga which was Blockade, The Innovator and The Angel when I felt that it needed it. Also the two chapters concerning the Dread Rot virus with the chapters Iruta and Dread Rot.
            
            I felt I filled the gap between the Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones quite well and now that I'm at the Clone Wars having all this action and battles has been hectic to say the least though I am enjoying writing it. I currently have a chapter in my head that is much more a diplomatic mission but has a battle in the background instead of in the foreground like it has been recently in my chapters. Writing chapters as long as I do is a lot of work but I think it's worth it when readers such as yourself say I'm doing great but also the fact you're looking forward to the next chapter so cheers.
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GSamus

@KancettoKryze Correct. I will say, some of the latest chapters felt like they blended together, but that's kinda just what happens when stories reach the Clone Wars: an imbalance of action and filler. Don't get me wrong, it's not supposed to be a complaint, but a lack of filler and an excess of long chapters concerning battles can just get mildly stale. Regardless, you're doing great, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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KancettoKryze

What I like hearing when asking people what their favourite chapter is the different responses because they all enjoy different elements so I'm considering that a positive. Though you are I think the first to say Winter is their favourite. When I've asked others it tends to be between Kancetto and Silara. So to hear someone say Winter is good too. Thanks. You all caught up are you?
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