@GSlaughter169 Don’t be ashamed! We all experiment with different things while writing. Publicity is a big thing when it comes to writing, it’s how authors make their money. Selling books can be hard, so don’t get too worked up over it. Even if you’re just aspiring to be an author and aren’t one quite yet, this is the place to learn, right? You know what doesn’t really work for you now, so you can improve your skills. Again, I’d really suggest revisiting this. As someone who knows a few people in the TV industry, I can say for sure that you could turn this story into something really spectacular. Just step back and figure out what you really want! Where do you wanna take it? Who are your characters? Even if you dislike what you wrote, if it counts for anything, I enjoyed reading it. :)