@Gabriel_Pope Thanks for posting this up, but sorry, I have to disagree on joining a book club as meh ... for me it depends who is critiquing your work and what book club you are in. As for covers, you need to be imaginative in my perspective... I always ask community members to do my covers.
But anyway putting all things aside, for all those who want more reads, main thing is good grammar and please use your verbs wisely.