Hi! Just found you're Percy Jackson wizarding book! And it's really pretty good! The descriptions are nice and the stories really intriguing bit you do need some work on grammar and there's a lot of info dumps but since you're story has so much potential I was wondering, would you be interested in me helping you edit your story? I can make comments on different paragraphs withb suggestions and grammar problems anything I see really if you wouldn't mind. Well, either way I'll keep reading you're stories. Hope you have a great day!
