GaiaEllie

Added more to chapter 3!! I'm feeling pretty lousy about the story so far. It's not what I'm hoping it to be. But, it's a very rough first draft, and I'm testing the waters!

GaiaEllie

I made a decision. Please remember that this is absolutely a first draft, and I am open to all constructive feedback. If you like the style of At Dusk so far, let me know. If you think I should stick with either first or third person narrative, let me know!
          
          Thanks friends!