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Just published a new Harry Potter Pic, be sure to check it out xxx
          'One Last Time'

Just read what you have up of Sinful Purity. I'm really excited to read more whenever you get it up. 

Your story is amazing, I am really enjoying it. 
          I'm from Australia to and so is my friend ssgghhrr. I will be sure to recommend your story to her as I am sure she will love it as as much a s I do.

Thnx for the follow :-)

Hi @elle3128,
          I'm the author of Pure (a tomione fic) and I saw your comment on one of my chapters about your story, so I thought I'd check it out. 
          Your story is really great so far! I love that you want constructive criticism on it! It shows that you really want to improve which I think is amazing! 
          All I really have to say is keep up the good work, keep the story intriguing, and don't go to edit until after the whole thing is completed because you will just end up in an endless cycle of editing and never finishing. 
          Great story idea!
          From, @rememberme525600