Gal_nxt_door

Please tell me if the prologue is good enough or needs some work. Please I need critics.
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Gal_nxt_door

@Gal_nxt_door Thank you Archana ❤️. I kept it vague to build suspense but I get what you mean. It does feel heavily vague... I'll upload the first chapter soon. I'm thinking of going the present-past route but I fear it'll make the book so confusing it sucks . What do you suggest?
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ArchanaJayanarayanan

@Gal_nxt_door hi, so I've read the updated prologue and it was amazing.. a little suggestion as a reader is that  it feels a little confusing because the content is so vague and we're lost at what all this leads to. But as a writer this is amazing, so well written. But like i said as much as it's beautiful we kind of don't know what's happening right now. But with the future chapter i guess we'll understand what's going on
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Gal_nxt_door

Please tell me if the prologue is good enough or needs some work. Please I need critics.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/352809136

Gal_nxt_door

@Gal_nxt_door Thank you Archana ❤️. I kept it vague to build suspense but I get what you mean. It does feel heavily vague... I'll upload the first chapter soon. I'm thinking of going the present-past route but I fear it'll make the book so confusing it sucks . What do you suggest?
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ArchanaJayanarayanan

@Gal_nxt_door hi, so I've read the updated prologue and it was amazing.. a little suggestion as a reader is that  it feels a little confusing because the content is so vague and we're lost at what all this leads to. But as a writer this is amazing, so well written. But like i said as much as it's beautiful we kind of don't know what's happening right now. But with the future chapter i guess we'll understand what's going on
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Nickelsmoony

Hey! I know this is super random but I'm a wattpad veteran from back in 2013-2016 and I'm looking for a work from that period of time. I'm 99% sure it's a series, and the main character is a vampire who was turned when he was a child a long time ago, there's a forbidden romance with another man (can't remember if they're also a vampire or human or something else) and that's about all I remember. Does that ring any bells? TIA <3