I got off the plane. This one little kid wouldn't stop screaming the entire 6 and a half hours. Now I'm in a car for 5 hours. Ugh. Sorry I haven't been posting. My phone wouldn't work very well.
I'll tell something about that. 1. Ya lost me the first chapter 2. You're chapters are extremely short. And 3. Most of your work is just pictures. You also need to give more detail. Like instead of saying. Sally: go eat your food. You should say. "Go eat your food." Sally said angrily. Or Sally:(angrily) go eat your food