Call Me Galaxy

I, uh, low-key kinda hate Part Four, lol.
          
          I think it stings even more for me because I remember genuinely believing that it was really good; I started to (kind of) set up the plotlines that would continue through the rest of "Yeah, We Know," and I felt like I did good at setting up the sort of anticipation in the readers that I had for how the plots would progress and resolve.
          
          It's odd to describe exactly what I find wrong with it now, and I'll try to find better words if someone asks me why, but I just feel this sense of embarrassment as I'm rereading it now - more embarrassment than any of my other original parts, and up until then, Part Two was the worst for me, lol.
          
          Anyways, I might retract the statement I made when I remastered TSWP's prologue, because after remastering Part Two, I'm starting to realize that I actually do have a different direction and outcome compared to where I thought I wanted to go four years ago (which wasn't going anywhere to begin with, or just had a much more vague idea than now). Then again, I also still don't know if most like the original line or the remastered line better, so I'm unsure if starting a new book with just the new content in it is a good move, unpublishing the originals to reduce clutter/confusion, or continuing to do what I'm doing now is the better move to make.

Hello!
          
          Happy 2025! Hope your holidays were well. :)
          
          The remastered version of Part Two is out now!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/242060534

Hello, it's been a little bit (again, consistency? What's that?). Progress is still being made on part two, but I don't know when exactly it will be out.
          
          Question, because clearly I haven't asked enough of those, lmao: do you guys want an entire chunk of the story dedicated to introducing all of the states like other fanfictions do? I don't think it's totally necessary, personally, especially since I post state profiles anyways, but maybe you'd want to see it parodied?

Is the part layout confusing, by the way? I feel like people might find it weird how part one and part two are separated by, like, six completely unrelated parts, just as an example, lol.

Greetings...
          
          The remastered first part of "Yeah, We Know" is published now! :D
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1476869269-the-states-were-personified-yeah-we-know

Hello! Rewritten part one is finished and part two and three's rewrites are still in the works. As you can probably tell, I will not be consistent in updates (but then again, when have I ever been consistent in anything?), so I hope y'all would be willing to be patient with me. :)
          
          Are there any readers still left from when they were hooked in 2020-2022? I'm just asking out of curiosity, to be honest.
          
          Also, the states book is at six-thousand reads?! It was at, like, three-thousand when I was inactive last - how did that happen, lol? It's not even that good.
          
          Speaking of stats, I've also realized that New York's character profile is much more popular than any other state profile. I don't know whether that's just because it's the first one or there's something particularly good or bad about him. 

Greetings...
          
          It's about 2:30 AM according to Eastern Standard Time, and the remastered prologue for "Yeah, We Know" is published now!
          
          Do tell me which you prefer and why so I have feedback to use for continued (re)writing. :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1469989059?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=GalaxyGirlStar24

Hello! The rewritten prologue and half of part one is done, though I'd at least want to finish the rest of part one before publishing the prologue. As a small little spoiler/fun fact, I kinda made the new prologue about four times as pong as the original... So that should be fun, lol.
          
          Here's a quick question that I've probably asked at some point ages ago:
          
          Would it make sense to personify US cities in Hetalia's context? I mean, like, DC seems to be acceptable, though that's kind of different-ish...?

Is it better to publish the remastered parts in the same book as the original parts, or upload them in a new book and continue from there?
          
          Should they just outright replace the originals altogether?

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          G r e e t i n g s . This might be a long one...
          
          I apologize for my recent period of not publishing anything. Here are all the relevant things that have happened since my latest (and longest) period of inactivity:
          
          - I learned better grammar and expanded my vocabulary somewhat.
          - I now narrate in present-tense rather than past-tense (ex. "He says," instead of, "he said").
          - I joined my school's marching band/indoor drumline for the first and last time last year and fell in love with them and front ensemble as a whole (glockenspiel/vibraphone gang, where y'all at?).
          - I turned eighteen on May 19th.
          - I graduated from high school on the 30th of the same month.
          
          Since then, I've been accepted to a few colleges, one of them being my top school out in California, and my mind has continued to reel over how to afford the rest of the $60,000 USD I need to even go there for one year. My plans right now are to postpone admittance and take a year to work (and maybe take a few community college classes online on the side) and save up money.