@Galena_4u
https://pin.it/3vd5eq8 Before I wrote Penance, I started writing a story about Nash and Alisa, their past, and why they stopped dating. But as I was working on it, I got more interested in Grayson's story instead. So, I stopped writing about Nash and Alisa and decided to focus on Grayson for the fanfic. I just wanted to share this with you because I liked a chapter about Nash and Alisa, and I thought fans of Inheritance Games might enjoy it too.
One idea I had was having Grayson get the justice he deserves. But not in finding a girl friend, but getting the inheritance that was rightfully his. I would love to write this, and might some day, but I don't have the time. I love your writing style, it is so beautiful and I greatly appreciate the descriptions you give not only to the characters but also to the settings and emotions of the characters. My idea was exploring how does Grayson's brothers feel about him inheriting the money? How will Grayson act, now being the richest teenager in the world? will he change or won't he?
Please do not feel pressured on making this, as I said it is just a suggestion. I really am grateful that you are willing for me to give you ideas. I can see it becoming a masterpiece if you do though. Have a good day!
I see you're almost done with Penance, and I was wondering if you had any other works in progress? I am going to miss getting my weekly chapter of Penance. This story is sooo good!!!
@Galena_4u would you be interested or ok with suggestions? I have a few, but don't want to pressure or offend you.
Another idea I had was could we maybe have a chapter from Alison's POV? I like reading how Grayson feels about her, but would be nice to see if she feels the same way about him.
Hi there! I was rereading chapter 54 in Penance and was wondering if you did make those changes you said you might? The hide and seek flashback seemed different from what I remember reading. It is still good if you did, was just curious. I also was wondering how you felt if I sent you some scenes I would maybe like to see. I really appreciated that you did the hide and seek request I had asked for, but I don't want you to feel like I am bothering you with my requests or feel like I am trying to have you write your story the way want it. I love what you have written so far and will not be upset if you would prefer I don't send you anything. Thank you and have a good day. (or night.)
Thank you!! One idea I had was Grayson and Alison have to go grocery shopping and he is very uncomfortable about it and Alison has to help him through it.
Yep, I made some changes, and I'm actually surprised you caught that. About suggestions, no problem. If you have any ideas, feel free to tell me. I'll check them out and choose the ones I like.
Thanks for updating. I just wanted to let you know that reading your story is one of the highlights of my day. I look forward to another chapter everytime a new one comes out. Have a good day!
Thank you for reading my work! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your support keeps me going, and I appreciate it.
Hi there! Could you maybe do a flash back scene of Grayson playing hide and seek with his brothers sometime? I actually wrote one but would love to read yours. All the other flashback scenes you have done have been excellent.