GallifreyanTARDIS12

So I have an English exam tomorrow and I'm writing it about Doctor Who. This is my draft idea for the last paragraph, what do you think?
          
          
          A sad man in his box of blue, high above both me and you.
          
          Yet not long after the pain his anger will truly kick in. If I where you I'd run fast because he is the light against darkness, like fire to the ice and if your on the wrong side - expect to feel the temper of a Time Lord. For he is... The Doctor.

Oh my Gallifrey!!!! Pearl Mackie is the new companion on Doctor Who!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!