Gamehero91

Back again. A lot can change in six years, yeah? I've got my work cut out for me in cleaning up my old ideas a bit, but the end result should be a good improvement. Hopefully.

Gamehero91

I have not felt like writing. I have not, for all this time, felt like writing at all. Then I got my hands on a little notebook and, bit by bit, slowly recovered my will to write. Expect a few of these writings from time to time... when I feel good enough to, I will update other stories.
          For now, I suppose I'll post a poem.

Gamehero91

...hello, fans and strangers alike. I have been... sorting through some personal issues, as well as dealing with college. Despite that, I wish to try writing again.
          ...I sincerely apologize for abandoning the site. My next works will be published in due time.

Meloyellow95

So my honest opinion. You lack a beginning. You have a story where animals talk, but the reader does not understand if that is normal or if this is a special cat. The reader might continue, but some won't and in the end that's a few readers lost just because you did not explain what is going on. Also, everything happens to quickly, you are moving to fast. The poor boy gets almost drowned, told he is special with powers, and gets attacked by wolves all in a handful of pages. Add some "filler" that has a small clue to what is to come. By filler I mean a transition between two scenes that is descriptive and seemingly lacks action but does hold important information. This will lead the reader into your world that you created instead of dropping a bomb on their head. I have to say though, I love the cat though, if a cat could talk that's exactly how it would act. Don't get rid of the kitty! Hope this helps.