Gamer120802

What do you think of my work? 

EpicSquad5

Where are you?! The Zootopia story needs adding to.

Gamer120802

@EpicSquad5 I'm going to try again tomorrow, I'm going to bed. Wish me luck
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EpicSquad5

@Gamer120802 one word reread it, took me 10 minutes or so to read it. Also for a middle schooler that wasn't bad, I've seen adults write stuff 4x worst than that.
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Gamer120802

@EpicSquad5 I might try again tonight. I'm gonna be honest with you, I wrote this in middle school and have no idea how I left it. 
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vintagelocket

A ZOOTOPIA FAN!! Let's be friends!! I'll make sure to check out your work!

vintagelocket

Ha ha Thanks!
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Gamer120802

@FairyCandyDiary it's fine, good luck with your book
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