Gangtsarosie
Soooo my dear Petals
My Little Step-Sissy has finally come to an end.
I’d really love to know your views—your thoughts mean everything to me
This story wasn’t perfect, but I truly gave it my best, and I’m grateful to each one of you who stayed till the end.
The wait is finally over…
because a new story is about to begin
CRIMSON HEART
Stay with me. This journey is just getting darker… and deeper.
"I was taught how to kill, not how to feel.
Then she walked in—
and my control started bleeding."♡
boooksppppenguin
@Gangtsarosie Writing is a journey and I'm glad I could share my perspective. Looking forward to seeing how your storytelling evolves—take care.
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Gangtsarosie
@Gangtsarosie Thank you for the review dear. I know it's like that because its my 1st time writing these types of stories. I'll keep these things in mind for the next story (^.^)
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boooksppppenguin
@Gangtsarosie author..... your writing skills are really good..I love it About the story review...I won't sugarcoat my words ... it's short and simple but it have many loopholes. The character and emotions are really feel like unattended. It lacks curiosity (Which keeps the story alive) and proper explanation about the character. The book definitely isn't something that a reader will want to reread again and again. I hope I'm not sounding rude or overly criticizing. I really appreciate your hard work . I hope my review will help you in future. Take care
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