Vince Purcell

Hi.
          
          Here's a couple of character ideas I think could use further fleshing out.
          
          The Twins
          
          Any teacher at Pridelands High who sees The Twins entering their Classroom knows they're in for a dose of double trouble. The Twins are basically balls of energy, and could probably give Bunga a run for his money if they were competing for the "Most Hyperactive Student" Award. Loud, boisterous and full of ideas, these two are always up for an adventure, or anything to brighten up their normally dreary routine at Pridelands High, and, when Kion and Vitani are kidnapped by the Outsiders, the twins are among the students who want to help rescue them.
          
          This is as much as I have on these two so far; they don't even have names yet.
          
          "Nuts"
          
          "Nuts" [real name so far unknown] is another of Kion's cousins, known for his overweight appearance and his asymetrical eyes, with one eye being significantly larger than the other. Nuts regularly appears confused, and often quickly loses the thread of a conversation, and often goes into a daydream during lectures when he should be paying attention to the teacher. Aside from daydreaming about other worlds, or outlandish adventures and other fantasy things, Nuts is also a lover of music and a regular at Miss Sanger's music club. Nuts isn't completely useless, however, and if you present him with a problem to solve, he will always have a solution in mind, and sometimes will come up with the correct one by accident. If his friends get into trouble, then Nuts will always step up to try and help bail them out. However, I'm guessing, frankly, he's probably a terrible fighter.
          
          Uru Abioye
          
          Uru is the dance teacher at Pridelands High, as well as being the Great Grandmother of Kion, Kiara and Kopa, and former wife of Ahadi and Mother of Mufasa and Scar. I don't have any backstory ideas for her yet, other than she spoilt Scar a little bit since he was the younger, and I could also use a physical description of her for the chapters she appears in.

Here is the list I posted of OCs in need of fleshing out just in case you didn't receive the notification:
          
          Unnamed OC 1 ~ this girl is Kiara's main rival for Queen Bee, basically comes across as a snobby rich kid when, in fact, she fears the limelight and hates being the centre of attention
          
           Unnamed OC 2 ~ daughter of Zira and Scar and full sister of Nuka
          
          Unnamed OC 3 ~ another of Zira's daughters and half sister of Nuka
          
          "Spotty" ~ another daughter of Zira's and half sister of Nuka
          
          "Dotty" ~ another daughter of Zira's, and half sister of Nuka
          
          Muuaji ~ Youngest Son of Zira, born in the Outlands
          
          Adah ~ Mother of Kovu and Vitani, former Olympic runner and an idol to Fuli
          
          Bisali ~ Father of Kovu and an Officer in the Pridelands City Police
          
          Unnamed OC 4 ~ Biological Father of Vitani, childhood friend of Simba and Nala traumatised by Scar's reign
          
          Unnamed OC 5 ~ Half sister of Vitani, nicknamed "The Snowdrops Girl"
          
          Unnamed OC 6 ~ Another of Vitani's half ~ sisters; needs a few personality ideas please?
          
          Unnamed OC 7 ~ Vitani's younger half ~ brother, very bubbly and full of life, friendly and unjudgmental to everyone
          
          Unnamed OC 8 ~ Tiifu's younger sister, bubbly, energetic, huge crush on Kion since she was a kid and Kion enjoys her company but only views her as a friend
          
          Unnamed OC 9 ~ elder sister of Zira and one of the original Outsiders, gentler than Zira towards children but supports Zira's political activities
          
          Unnamed OC 10 ~ Husband of Zira's sister; comes across as a loyal Outsider but, in actuality, hates the Outlands and just wants to return to Pridelands City, often beats up on the kids as a means of venting his frustration
          
          Kos ~ Son of Zira's sister, argues a lot with Nuka and Kovu about who should be the "Chosen One," secretly protective and a good friend
          
          Unnamed OC 11 ~ daughter of Janja and Jasiri, often used as a scout by Zira
          
          Tomyris ~ a member of Jasiri's gang and one of the leaders of the Outlander Resistance to Scar

Hi.
          
          How are things with you?
          
          If you have a look over on my profile you will see I have been posting some character descriptions I thought you might like to read and some ideas for OCs that I could use some name ideas for.
          
          I was also wondering if you have any more ideas for Ushari's outfit; I loved the snakeskin boots idea, so that's definitely going to be included.

Hey.
          
          How are things going with you? I hope you are well and I am looking forward to reading the first chapter of your story when it's completed.
          
          If you take time to visit my profile you'll see I've posted some more OC ideas that I could use some outfit ideas for as well as names if you have some suggestions. You'll also see I've posted some character descriptions for Vitani's Guard here on your profile; I could use some surname ideas for them as well as physical descriptions and outfit ideas if you have the time.

Hey.
          
          Can I just ask how you are doing? I haven't heard anything from you for what feels like ages now.

Hi.
          
          I just thought I'd ask how things are going; I noticed you've been very quiet over the last few months and I was wondering how you are.

Hi.
          
          I ran out of words last time so here's the next part of the Dark Guard's profiles.
          
          I need some surname ideas for them and any outfit ideas you may have for them, along with any ideas regarding what might have happened to their parents.
          
          Tazama
          
          Tazama is the strategist of the Dark Guard. Devilishly intelligent, observant, and clever, Tazama is very rational and reasonable. She never goes into battle without a clear plan which she is 100% sure will end with victory, and, sometimes, if she can help it, try and avoid battle altogether by proposing some sort of alternative solution, which can lead her to being branded a "Pacifist" by the other Outsiders. 
          
          Tazama is confident in her abilities, despite insecurities regarding her identity ~ she's descended, through her Mother, from Askari, the brother of Mohatu, and, therefore, is a relative of Simba and Kion, but chose to hide her Pridelander blood from the other Outsiders because of the problems a Pridelander ~ bred Outsider would cause, and is able to support her team through cunning, wit, and strategy.
          
          Shabaha
          
          Shabaha is the "wild card" of the Dark Guard; she's known for her crazy laugh, which makes her an intimidating figure on the battlefield, and is full of confidence and utterly fearless in the face of danger. Shabaha rarely hesitates to throw the first punch, and, unlike Tazama, will often charge headlong into battle, leading to situations where her friends have to hold her back from dangerous and potentially fatal situations. She's also very opinionated, and arguments with Shabaha tend to get loud and intense, and often descend into outright fist fights.
          
          Shabaha is the half ~ sister of Nuka, and is actually one of Scar's daughters ~ her Mother found her birth deeply traumatising and passed out while giving birth to her, leading to her enraged Grandmother giving her to Zira before leaving the Pridelands altogether. Shabaha doesn't know this because Zira chose to keep her parentage secret like Imara's.

Hi.
          
          Can I just ask, how do these sound as ideas for my human LG story?
          
          If you have a look on my profile you'll see that I've posted some new dialogue between characters that I could use a hand with completing.
          
          The Dark Guard
          
          "The Dark Guard," as they are nicknamed by the Pridelanders, represent the elite of Zira's Army, either her best or worst [depending on who you're asking] fighters that the Outlands have to offer, and answerable only to Zira. 
          
          These ladies are all either butch lesbians or bisexual, and, as Zira herself may discover, a growing teenager may only be held down for so long...
          
          Imara
          
          Imara is the strongest member of the Dark Guard. Unusually strong and muscular, even as a child, and is very loyal and loving to her sisters and secretly fears losing the people in her life she loves. Imara is very confident in her own abilities and is always pushing herself to do better, sometimes even testing the limits of Zira's patience.
          
          Imara is actually one of Zira's daughters, but is unaware of her parentage ~ Zira kept it secret in order to prevent her becoming jealous of Kovu; Nuka already hates Kovu and Zira doesn't want another handicap.
          
          Kasi
          
          Kasi appears to have the short end of the stick in terms of her lineage; whereas all of Zira's followers were related to Zira in one way or another, Kasi was born in the Outlands, but was considered healthy enough that she was able to survive the militaristic regime imposed by Zira, and is rather thin and lanky owing to a lifetime of bad food and harsh training.
          
          Kasi is one of the most opinionated of the Dark Guard, and she's able to quickly form an argument and is known for her acrobatic grace, sharp memory and the swiftness of her kicks and punches; indeed, it's claimed she may well have been Zira's "Chosen One" had it not been for Kovu, with whom she is very close.
          
          Tazama
          
          Tazama is the strategist of the Dark Guard. Devilishly intelligent, observant and clever, Tazama is very rational and reasonable.

Hi.
          
          Do you have any ideas for a physical description of Ushari? My only ideas so far are that Ushari has golden hair and is very tall.
          
          I could also use any ideas you may have as to how Maric and his friends bully Kion, short of physically attacking him, since I imagine attacking the President of the student body would result either in detention or expulsion.

Can I just ask if you have any ideas for a physical description for Ushari and any outfit ideas for him? In my next chapter Kion will be introducing Vitani to Ushari.