Smiles0120
Thanks for your Vote!
Hope you enjoy poems coming up
Happy reading!!
Garimapm
Garimapm
Thick walls
Inside that thick walled castle, stands a princess alone
Not wanting for a prince to come,
Not waiting to be rescued.
Behind the closed windows and walls,
She is soothing her aches, she feels secured.
I wish she knows inside the thick walls, alone she stands.
I wish she knew if someone sneaks in she stands no chance.
I wish she knew she remains defenceless inside the thick walls.
I wish she knew she’ll be at the mercy of the intruder if the walls crumbles and falls.
I wish she knew if penetrated, she can be easily manipulated inside the closed walls
coderedsam
I'm not a good critique to anyone and the intentional complement was so that things don't stop as of yet. I would rather read more of what your mind has to offer.
Garimapm
@coderedsam Really!!! intentional complements will not take u anywhere with. I would have appreciated if it was honest critique and not intentional.
coderedsam
You still haven't posted it yet
Garimapm
@coderedsam you are one stubborn brat... (wanted to write braty kid, but that's not a word)... U'll make me search for the original one then....
coderedsam
But I really want that one.it's like etching at the back of my mind.every other time when I think about it
Garimapm
@coderedsam see not my best but i still wrote something seriously after about 6years.... so something i think i can show u... not the murderer one but for now... my first baby step... appreciate it