
Garimapm
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Thick walls Inside that thick walled castle, stands a princess alone Not wanting for a prince to come, Not waiting to be rescued. Behind the closed windows and walls, She is soothing her aches, she feels secured. I wish she knows inside the thick walls, alone she stands. I wish she knew if someone sneaks in she stands no chance. I wish she knew she remains defenceless inside the thick walls. I wish she knew she’ll be at the mercy of the intruder if the walls crumbles and falls. I wish she knew if penetrated, she can be easily manipulated inside the closed walls

coderedsam
I'm not a good critique to anyone and the intentional complement was so that things don't stop as of yet. I would rather read more of what your mind has to offer.
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Garimapm
@coderedsam Really!!! intentional complements will not take u anywhere with. I would have appreciated if it was honest critique and not intentional.
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