Bob the builder

Hey...
          I apologize for invading your space...but I would appreciate it if you could give my book a chance...
          Kindly let me know your suggestions, I would be glad to improve..
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/408411732?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=yourdivineruin
          
          Thank You..