I aspire to become a movie director who writes their books first then makes it into a movie directing it to go as I have pictured it when I was writing it. I'm looking for helpful feedback on the book that I am working on, 'The Three of Us'. I want to know what readers here think. Does this first chapter make you want more? If I get comments I will post the next chapter.
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The Day the Moon Left
A somewhat of a part two to 'My Empty sky'. Both I wrote thinking about someone very dear to me that passed...
The Three of Us
His whole life so far had been the devil's board game, toying with his emotions using the girl he'd fallen fo...
