GarySpear

A little lite reading today.  The emotion seemed to fit my mood.

GarySpear

And Caesar's spirit, raging for revenge, With Ate by his side come hot from hell, Shall in these confines with a monarch's voice Cry "Havoc!" and let slip the dogs of war, That this foul deed shall smell above the earth With carrion men, groaning for burial.

Trewest

@GarySpear LOL it's alright, we all have to start somewhere. 
          Elsewhere is my first ever attempt at anything approaching a script. Everything I write with the images in my head, but this is the first time I'm trying to set it up so that it could be easily converted into a tv/movie. Kind of a challenge for myself :D
          I would love any critiques or tips you could suggest, everything is a learning experience.

GarySpear

Don't worry I've seen so much that very little creeps me out.  I may get morally outraged now and again.  But never creeped out.  LOL.  Anyway I look forward to reading your work.  I love film and am working on making my own short films.  So your writing style interests me very much.