hanalynn_
Helloo, hindi sa hinusgahan ko yung work mo, pero ang bilis ng pagka escalate nung story. Sa first 2 chapters sila nag meet and became together right? I recommend na kung kaya mo, ipakita mo yung progress nung dalawa throughout sa relationship nila. Like all the good times and the hardships, yung mag sawsaw sa relasyon nila. That way, mas magiging thrilling at exciting yung story ☺️