HeyoitsAvery
Hi i have a bit of a tip for you cause it looks like your trying to write stories and it confused me when reading the matchablossom story.when the characters are talking put “around the words” so people don’t get confused when reading also I’m sorry if you find this offensive in any way
Geatnashya123
@HeyoitsAvery I don't really reading the story I don't find it offensive I just reread cuz I looked at your comments I reread the stories and I'm going to make sure to put in improvements on my future stories that doesn't mean that I'll take matchablossom down it just means that I'm a focus more on detail because again I wrote that story for a dare and I didn't take him much consideration but I am going to write stories again and that story was my first story on Wattpad so yah there will be improvement done if you want to see some more improvement all I got to tell you is to keep up with the stories to see my improvement and fresh ideas