Gem Thompson

I've given 'The Obsidian Torch' a complete overhaul. It's now much faster paced, the villain is more villainy (but still gorgeous!) and it has a much more dramatic ending.
          	I would love your feedback and suggestions still though! Here's the link to it 
          	http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/13156514-the-obsidian-torch