GeneralVortex06

My first favourite anime girl was Erza Scarlet from Fairy Tail, who has red hair.
          	Adam Taurus, my favourite character unless Grievous is in the room, has red hair.
          	My favourite good characters in Rwby are Nora, Penny and Ruby, who either are red heads or has red in their hair
          	Messmer the Imapler from Elden Ring, is one of my favourite Video Game characters, has red hair. 
          	My childhood fictional crush was Daphne from Scooby Doo, who is a redhead.
          	
          	I may have a type when it comes to fictional characters I like. Either redheads or cyborgs. Maybe I should make my Cyborg villain, Vultunica, a redhead? Ultimate favourite character.

Olympiatookmysoul

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@GeneralVortex06 
          	  Same. Only my type is either women who would kick my ass (my first fictional crush was Franziska Von Karma from Ace Attorney, I also fancy Cynthia from Pokemon and you know very well how Sienna gets me) but I also like characters who dress in red and black. For example, Shay Cormac from AC: Rouge is one of my favorite video game protagonist, I like Adam and Ruby. And Akagi from Azur Lane is my favorite anime girl. (And she could kick my ass)
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Olympiatookmysoul

Been cooking something up. Might post it later if I have the time.

GeneralVortex06

@Olympiatookmysoul It was a great start. Looking forward for the next chapter.
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GeneralVortex06

My first favourite anime girl was Erza Scarlet from Fairy Tail, who has red hair.
          Adam Taurus, my favourite character unless Grievous is in the room, has red hair.
          My favourite good characters in Rwby are Nora, Penny and Ruby, who either are red heads or has red in their hair
          Messmer the Imapler from Elden Ring, is one of my favourite Video Game characters, has red hair. 
          My childhood fictional crush was Daphne from Scooby Doo, who is a redhead.
          
          I may have a type when it comes to fictional characters I like. Either redheads or cyborgs. Maybe I should make my Cyborg villain, Vultunica, a redhead? Ultimate favourite character.

Olympiatookmysoul

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@GeneralVortex06 
            Same. Only my type is either women who would kick my ass (my first fictional crush was Franziska Von Karma from Ace Attorney, I also fancy Cynthia from Pokemon and you know very well how Sienna gets me) but I also like characters who dress in red and black. For example, Shay Cormac from AC: Rouge is one of my favorite video game protagonist, I like Adam and Ruby. And Akagi from Azur Lane is my favorite anime girl. (And she could kick my ass)
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Olympiatookmysoul

Been thinking about and developing Darth Nix (FKA Whitley Schnee after having Remmnants biggest crash-out since Salem) and I’ve been toying around with the moment that pushes him over the edge, and seeing as (in my opinion) cannon Whitley has as much personality as my broken AC unit. One idea was that his school life is a complete hell (mostly due to his developing force powers getting him into several awkward positions that usually end up with him getting expelled) also him trying to just get his parents attention and approval (well, mostly Jacques) that even when he dose everything Jacques said he still can’t give his son the time of day. I’m even toying with him sneaking out and causing some mischief in town just so he can get his father’s attention. Eventually he’s (discretely) sent to a school for troubled youths where he forms a tight friend group, and even getting a girlfriend, only for Jacques to rip it all away when he finds out Whitley’s girlfriend is a fanus and pulls him out of the school. This drives Whitley to… how do I put this? Tries to “Leave the Server” only to be saved by one of Dooku’s acolytes (I decided that I’m putting Darth Nero back in as the leader of the Dark Acolytes who eventually coupes Dooku and takes control of the CIS and Turing it into the Neo-Sith Empire) 
          (For this version of Whitley, the troubled youth with abilities he dons’t understand. I’d use “Good Kid” from the Percy Jackson Musical (Listen to it, it’s great) as his theme, and especially  the small verse from the mini-reprisal at the end sung by Luke)

Olympiatookmysoul

@GeneralVortex06 
            Thank! I’ve even toyed with some edge-lord quotes for him.
            
            *When confronted by Weiss and Winter who try and pull him back from the dark side*
            “You two were never there when I needed you the most! You were so absorbed in your own bond that you cut me out of your lives completely! All those years fighting an un-winnable battle alone! Why? Because when you look at me all you see is the old man? Your tormentor? Guess what? HE WAS MY TORMENTOR TOO!”
            
            *To Weiss after capturing and interrogating Weiss*
            “You abandoned me. Left me in that prison of ice and torment. I didn’t have you, I didn’t have Winter, and I didn’t have my so-called mother. All I had was The Force, and The Force shall set me free.”
            
            *To Willow*
            “Whitley Schnee is dead. That little boy you abandoned for the bottle died pathetic and alone a long time ago! And from the ashes rose one of the greatest warriors the Sith have ever seen!”
            
            *Confronting Jacques*
            “What’s the matter old man? Finally facing someone who can’t be bought? You can’t bear the sight of the monster you created? Where the prideful man who paraded around Atlas like he was a king? *He starts force-choking him* And so the proud man dies. Not on a cross of gold, but on a humble stake of tin.”
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GeneralVortex06

@Olympiatookmysoul Yeah, good ideas. I like how Whitley has some more backstory and is not exactly Jacque 2.0 before becoming Darth Nix.
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GeneralVortex06

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These are my ideas of different ideologies in Rwby, and what the characters follow:
          Ruby and Yang: We don't care for politics
          Weiss: Auth capitalism (Volume 1 only) Liberal capitalism (Post volume 1)
          Blake: Liberal Faunusism 
          Ironwood: Atlesian Nationalism
          Tyrian: Anarcho-Grimmism 
          Salem: Grimmism
          Adam: Faunus ultranationalism/Taurusism 
          Qrow: Politics? Fuck that.
          Raven: Anarcho libertarianism 
          Jacque: Authoritarian capitalism
          Cinder: Despotism/I have all the power now, fuck the rest of you. 
          Ozpin: Wizard monarchism (As Ozma) Anti-Grimmism (As Ozpin)

Cosmicadventurer22

@GeneralVortex06 
            I like to think that Ironwood is progressive in comparison with the rest of the atlesians. The same for the rest of the known atlesian soldiers (Winter, Ace ops, Olive Harper). 
            
            I think that Adam would be Nazbol. Or something of authoritarian far left.
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GeneralVortex06

@Olympiatookmysoul Qrow just wakes up with a hangover and finds out he somehow led a coup and took over Atlas.
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Olympiatookmysoul

@GeneralVortex06 
            A RWBY HoI4 mod holds a lot of fun potential if done right. So far I only have an idea for Menagerie where the leaders are the fallowing:
            Non-Aligned (Starting): Ghira 
            Democratic: Kali or Blake
            Facist: Sienna
            Communist: Adam
            
            Draco Content just sees Salem wear different hats when you change ideologies.
            Everything else I have little to no idea about aside Jacque maybe being the Facist leader of Atlas? And (Through a funny story told through the focus tree and by events.) Qrow becomes the Communist leader of Atlas by complete accident.   
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Olympiatookmysoul

Been thinking of revising my Jedi!Adam idea lately. So far here’s what I got:
          
          -Adam and Anakin become best friends after Anakin arrives at the temple.
          
          -Adam goes with Anakin to Naboo with Padame. His real mission is to spy on Anakin and report to the council if he breaks the code or does something stupid. (He ends up playing wingman for Anakin and facepalms at his flirting. Also he covers their asses when they go to Tatooine before informing the council that Anakin, Padme and Obi-Wan are on Geonoisis.)
          
          -Adam fights alongside Plo to help destroy a Genosiasian airfield, thus securing republic AS.
          
          -Adam is Anakin’s best man at his wedding helps cover Anakin when he goes to make booty-calls at the senate building.
          
          -Adam Co-finds the Wolffepack with Plo and Wolffe after surviving the Malevolence.
          
          -Adam gets knighted shortly after Season 3 of TCW 
          
          - Adam becomes a Jedi Shadow and leads an elite ARC unit within the Wolffepack. (Specializing in Black Op missions and irregular warfare as well as advising and training Anti-Separatist insurgents)
           

Olympiatookmysoul

@GeneralVortex06 If I can find the time to. Kind of have my hands full right now trying to find a summer job, so we’ll see.
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GeneralVortex06

@Olympiatookmysoul Sick. Are you actually going to make this a story?
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GeneralVortex06

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Adam: Well, well, well. If it isn't Winter Schnee, you know I've been looking forward for this duel. And when I kill you I will mail your head to your father.
          Winter: Knowing him he'd probably sell it for profit.
          Adam:.... Are you okay?
          Winter: No... anyways, I haven't got the time to fight you *Proceeds to kick Adam in the balls*
          Adam: *Error.404.AdamTaurus.Broken*
          All other male villains in Rwby: Arghhhh, gods, of all places why did she choose the balls?
          Non-Rwby male villains: Fuck, even we felt that, and we've from different franchises. 
          Darth Maul: Good thing that doesn't work on me, anymore.

GeneralVortex06

Yuma: Yo, boss. The High Leader has asked for a private meeting with you?
          Adam: Private meeting? Since when did she do those?
          Yuma: I dunno, but she's ordering you to her private chambers... also, don't you think she's been acting strangely lately?
          Adam: Shes has, but I may as well get this over with.
          *Adam then enters Sienna's chambers. All he sees is nothing but a bed before hearing the door behind him being locked, as Sienna is behind him*
          Sienna: It's that time again, Adam. I'll make sure to pay you this time. 
          Adam: *Sighs* My time has come.

Olympiatookmysoul

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Sienna: Listen buster, I got to continue the Khan bloodline and unfortunately you were the first man that popped in my head. So buckle the fuck up. Let’s see how wild this rodeo gets. *She licks her lips*
            
            Adam: That’s kinda racist.
            
            Sienna: Shut up and get on the bed boy! *She pulls out a whip*
            
            Adam: YES MOMMY!
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Olympiatookmysoul

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How I picture a Salem the CSR gang going:
          
          Salem: You know,’I’m gonna have a little fun with you, YOU will choose the form of your destructor!
          
          Jack: Okay, okay I think I got this! Very cute! It will be whatever we think of! So if we think of Levi’s wife, then Levi’s wife will appear and destroy us! So everyone clear your heads! Empty your minds! We only have one shot at this!
          
          Salem: The destructor has been chosen!
          
          Jack: Whoa! Whoa! No one chose anything! Did you choose anything?
          
          Levi: No!
          
          Jack: Did you?!
          
          Adam: My mind is totally blank!
          
          Jack: I didn’t think of anything!
          
          *Everyone turns to face Gabriel*
          
          Gabriel: I couldn’t help it. It just popped in there!
          
          Jack: What?! What just “popped in there”?
          
          Gabriel: I tried to think of the most harmless thing possible. 
          
          Levi: LOOK!
          
          Gabriel: NO! It can’t be!
          
          Adam: What did you think of Gabriel?!~ Holy shit!
          
          *A giant Grimm Rabbit appears*
          
          Gabriel: It’s the Pumpkin Pete Marshmallow Bunny.
          
          Grimm Bunny: *Roars*
          
          Jack: Wells there something you don’t see everyday. 
          
          Gabriel: I tried to think of the most harmless thing! Something from my childhood! Something that could never ever possibly destroy us!
          
          Adam: *Scoffing* Good thinking Gabriel!
          
          Gabriel: We used to eat Pumpkin Pete with Dad as we watched cartoons on Saturday Mornings!
          
          Jack: Gabriel has gone bye-bye Levi. What have you got left?
          
          Levi: Sorry boss, I’m terrified beyond the capacity of rational thought.
          
          
          
          
          
          

GeneralVortex06

@Olympiatookmysoul Heh.  Nice Ghostbuster reference
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GeneralVortex06

If I was writing the White Fang in volume 4 as well as Sienna and Adam, I'll keep Sienna alive longer and instead give Adam a rival who constantly gets in the way. Both try to get Sienna to back their plans, but she doesn't know who to back. Eventually the rivalry hits it's breaking point and Sienna comes up with a plan to deal with both the plans and the rivalry. That is to get Adam and the rival to fight to the death, the one who survives will have their plan go ahead. 
          Anyway Adam and his rival right, Adam struggles but wins the fight and so then Sienna allows him to attack Haven, but warns him that if he fails, then there will be concequences.

56bruno56

@GeneralVortex06 What if this rival has powers of magnetism? A nice reference to Magneto.  If you wonder about Pyrrha, she seems to have control over non-magnetic metals. This guy would be exclusively capable of controlling magnetic metals.
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GeneralVortex06

@Cosmicadventurer22 Yeah, I think that's the idea many people wanted, and if you ask me it is the way Crwby should've gone with him.
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GeneralVortex06

*Little thing including the overarching villain of my original story*
          Blake: There's no such thing as pure evil.
          Andrew Skultun: *Currently crucifying someone upside down* What was that, girl?
          Blake: I... I take that back.
          Andrew: Have you ever met the Great Reaper before?
          Blake: No.
          Andrew: *Takes out a buzzsaw* Would you like to?