DerTisch1
Hello General Divino,
now that my thrid story is over, I want to ask you three things:
1. How did you like my story?
2. I saw that you also read "Lana x ∆bbie [Cambio de Rol] [FPE AU]" from "PhantomClonicFic" and I wonder how would you compare these two stories.
And lastly: HOW THE F#CK DID THIS STORY MANAGE TO BE THE ONLY FPE FANFIC TO LAND INTO YOUR PEAK LIST?
General__Divino
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@ DerTisch1 Alr, first of all, your third story is by far the best, it has good pacing, good grammar, and was very mature(had both gore and lemon) which I like a lot( I also like the ship). PhantomClonicFic's story had none of this, and to make it worse had fucking emojis and memes bettewn the story(that just kills all the inmerssion for me). And for the last part, idk what to tell you bruh, it is simply the best fpe story that I have read for now(not counting storys from other websites[like ao3]), I have other stories on my library that look good but Im saving them, so yours is the best. With all this said, I hope I have answered all your questions.
keep writing stories pls, i'm quite the fan xd
