GenericRedDot

I got permission to make a fanfiction of a fanfiction and now I have too many ideas floating around my head

seevoid

@GenericRedDot i have sent a add friend request. the name is kiana. and if you need help in gundam story or information about MS and some manga story i can help ya
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GenericRedDot

I am going with the RX-93FF v Gundam this time, I think the Psychoframe gimmick would make the story more interesting
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GenericRedDot

@GenericRedDot i do have a discord, its "genericreddot"
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GenericRedDot

I got permission to make a fanfiction of a fanfiction and now I have too many ideas floating around my head

seevoid

@GenericRedDot i have sent a add friend request. the name is kiana. and if you need help in gundam story or information about MS and some manga story i can help ya
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GenericRedDot

I am going with the RX-93FF v Gundam this time, I think the Psychoframe gimmick would make the story more interesting
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GenericRedDot

@GenericRedDot i do have a discord, its "genericreddot"
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seevoid

hey i have some seggustion for the gundam story. how about you take gundam like Ex S gundam or the F90 series. not the F91 but the F90. it still exotic enough then the WfM MS but still make sense.

GenericRedDot

@seevoid I may as well do the Superior and Ex-S Gundam at this point, although I don't have a lot of knowledge about the Sentinel MS.
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GenericRedDot

I am concerned with my first story's plot, like seriously...
          
          I am considering unpublishing it, but I still want to be given feedback with my current style of writing, which I feel is lacking. The story feels like jank, and I have no idea how to shove the Phenex into the story in the proper way.
          
          Should I rework the story, the basic idea may remain, but the events may change, as they do not make any sense at the moment.